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joy has left/Joy has left (Alzheimer's)

joy has left/Joy has left (Alzheimer's)

In loving memory of a patient I once knew, but now only see.

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Sean Corcoran
Jun 03, 2025
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I know, I know. I said I was doing all my poetry through another avenue now. But, this is an old one, refined. I truly think it's the best poem I've ever written. It crushes me every time. -
Sean Corcoran
grayscale photo of closed-eyes woman
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A River Damned.


A lifetime of wisdom 

once erupted, without suspect 

like a fjord 

flowing freely as she chattered. 


A steady stream, slowly stemming over the years— 

time damned it to a trickle. 

Today, the tip of her tongue 

flutters lamely between chipped teeth.
  

I sit and I watch 

where last year gushed a story; 

now the river's mouth is bone-dry,

opening and closing as she screams her story silent. 


I realise that,

memories which once coursed freely 

now frozen by time;  

forming snowflakes unique. 


Her lips, mouth and tongue 

no longer a safe haven, 

for tales to be spun, 

childhood stories recalled. 

Instead now an expanding, mass grave  

of memories almost spoken. 

snowflakes cruelly melting, 

in a furnace of forget.  


I sit and I watch  

as what she tries so hard to tell me 

perhaps a tale or a poem,  

maybe just about her day— 


I sit and I watch  

as it trickles down her cheek.  

a snowflake melted,  

a memory lost; 

leaking from a glassy-eyed, 

numb gaze.  


I sit and I watch 

as the last sparkle,

leaves her eye.


joy has left/Joy has left.


-S-2025

(Name/s have been changed).


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This piece is my submission to the Worldwide ‘Dementia Together Magazine’, 2025 Poetry competition.

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